Monday, April 12, 2010

Love Story

the original "Love Story"by DiAndre Brown
Male Perspective (peep his fb to read)


(Female Perspective):
by Deneen

His life and dreams are packed at the front door
He is leaving, what started as heartbreak turned into much more
It’s a bigger extreme
And him leaving is to obscene
Because two heart in love should be playing on the same court, the same team
And he says, “Me being away from you for too long makes my heart scream”
But in her heart, him following his dreams means so much more to her then what it seems
In his arms she feels so secure
But without his security, pain enters
Her heart hurts, she begins to suffer from a heart that hurts and she hates being injured
He raises her chin and looks her straight in the eyes and says she’s the love of his life
Love and water fills his dark brown eyes
She knows that they tell no lies
And if love meant reaching new and other heights
They would both fly
But it looks like it’s going to storm, and their hearts are immediately informed
Buckets of water overflow her clouds
But them being together always seems to overpower any storm
She looks him with teary eyes and right here, right now shedding these tears makes her feelings cry
He looks at his watch, it’s time for him to say goodbye
She knows in his heart she will always have a home
Before he goes
They share a kiss
And it’s pure bliss
With him being gone she will miss
Paradise
He gets in his car in she goes in the house
She leans on the front door in cries her whole heart out
She finds herself on the floor crying alone, wishing this particular moment would just fade out
She wishes she can go back to the blissful kiss or the heartfelt eye contact
And wishes she could freeze one of those moments when he was with her and push stop

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